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April 27th 2007 00:14
I'm feeling disconnected
sitting here with me
nobody calls
noone drops in
to keep me company

Self imposed exile
isolated and alone
one by one
the minutes pass
my mood it sets the tone

And though I sit
and think too much
and live inside my head
I really truly wish
I was anywhere instead

Oscillate......Isolate
thoughts go back and forth
and round and round
the compass needle
swings first south then north

I sometimes close my eyes
and make a wish and dream
that all my thoughts
get washed away

in a conscious flowing stream

Bathed in cool clean water
till they're fresh and new
and then returned to me
so I can start anew.....






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Comment by Lily

April 27th 2007 00:39
Miss Nomer,

Your morning compass thoughts, match my own roundabout.. i ride it often too..

your thoughts inspire meta~

i try get a grasp on wtf is driving these wheels .. who wants to be chauffeured by a stranger? i find myself tapping them on the shoulder saying 'you can turn off now, can we slow down, where are we?' .. sometimes, i just bail... and head for the nearest bus station, home..

i love this poem; the voice in it, heard and well understood... oh and great rhyming too..

~Lily

Comment by Miss Nomer

April 27th 2007 00:42
Dear Lily.....thanks......I'm in a rhyming mood.....but seriously contemplating a bath.........X

Comment by Lily

April 27th 2007 00:53
'heat and scent
seeping into every pore
i am silky
i feel the water love me'


~Lily

Comment by charliesgirl_992000

April 27th 2007 01:42
".....Oscillate......Isolate
thoughts go back and forth
and round and round
the compass needle
swings first south then north...."

i LOVE this, the way it flows!" i just LOVE the way you write. i've never been able to write poems. i'm very creative, but just not in that way.
Tammy

Comment by Miss Nomer

April 27th 2007 01:48
Dear Tammy....I feel like I am just finger painting when it comes to poetry....but I enjoy it and I guess writing my thoughts done is preferable to them spinning round and round in my head.....thanks so much for the comment X

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