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April 26th 2007 06:52
Ive been looking for love
in all the wrong places
and wondering
what went wrong

Love cannot grow
in farrow soil
in a shadow
without the sun

Life is full of lessons
that cant be taught
if your heart
is a closed book

When I look back
I shake my head
at the words
I misunderstood

I was looking for reason
when reason
wasnt in season
for lessons in my life....





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Comment by David

April 26th 2007 07:13
Dear Miss Nomer ...

Life is full of lessons
that cant be taught
if your heart
is a closed book

When I look back
I shake my head
at the words
I misunderstood

Don't think you're Robinson Crusoe ... We are all human ...

I love those two stanzas ... there's so much depth of thought in them ... I can spend hours on words so perfectly arranged like that ...

David ...

Comment by Wendi

April 26th 2007 07:13
Beautifully expressed.

Good to see you.




Comment by Miss Nomer

April 26th 2007 07:18
Dear David and Wendi.....
thank you both.......

David I sometimes wish I spent hours before I expressed myself......it might be a lot better that way...but I just have a terrible habit of throwing words out and often they come flying back in my face.......

Wendi....Good to see your beautiful icon image as well, I havent been posting but I have been reading and voting and for you always x

Comment by David

April 26th 2007 07:28
Dear Miss Nomer ...

You throw your words out unedited to people who genuinely love you?

They will rarely ever be thrown back in your face ...

The ones that are? ... You'll know why they are ... but it won't cause a major rift ...

We are human beings ... It's high time we all learnt to accept each other and forgive each other for being human ...

Anything you've ever said to me that you think offended me? I don't remember them okay? ...

I'm so glad you're still blogging ...

David ...

Comment by MelissaA

April 26th 2007 07:36
That first line I'm sure was used in a song somewhere and now I am going mad trying to pick it - it was an old one I think...... OK a little off topic, but now you've made me get this stuck in my head, so I thought I'd try and share the joy of that wonderful effect around. ; )

Comment by katyzzz

April 26th 2007 07:40
Love can be elusive, it seems it's easier for some than for others.

katyzzz

Comment by Miss Nomer

April 26th 2007 07:48
Dear MelissaA..
The first two lines.....that's what set of the poem and I cant think of it either!!!!! I'm still singing the first two lines.......X

Comment by Miss Nomer

April 26th 2007 07:49
Dear Katy Z...what I guess I was trying to get at is..I am 44 and had a lot of great men in my life....that left..so I have to get to the stage in my life when I accept responsibility for my part in that....and deeply know that my heart has been a closed and dark place for a long time where no love could grow...you could do me an ms paint of that if you will? x

Comment by Miss Nomer

April 26th 2007 07:52
Dear David......I continue to hold you in my highest esteem...as a writer (and shut up any nay sayers I have read this persons "other" real life writing)..
and as a person......thank you X and its nice to be back but I'm not doing thought of the day anymore it was too much of a commitment...X again

Comment by Miss Nomer

April 26th 2007 08:19
Dear Melissa A........
Waylon Jennings.....
I was looking for love in all the wrong places
looking for love in all the wrong places...

There u go....

X

Comment by DuskDevi

April 26th 2007 08:22
...you certainly put words in all the right places....

Love cannot grow
in farrow soil
in a shadow
without the sun


Thank you for the lovely poem...this one...and the other one.

Dusk



Comment by Miss Nomer

April 26th 2007 08:26
Dear Dusk,
Sometimes I do..put words and hopes and dreams and other things in the right places....and sometimes I dont.......
You are entirely welcome.... always and now that I am sort of kind of back I sincerely wish (no ...hope), to see you here..not that its a long walk to your's or anything....X

Comment by Lily

April 26th 2007 09:44
Glad you're back around too Miss Nomer, this poem is wonderful, it feels like a book being re-opened..

~Lily

Comment by Miss Nomer

April 26th 2007 09:49
Dear Lily.....chapter one......X

Comment by Lily

April 26th 2007 11:47
read to me sometime...


Comment by charliesgirl_992000

April 27th 2007 01:33
"Looking for love in all the wrong places, looking for love on too many faces.... maybe something like "what i've been dreaming of, dah, dah,dah. ..."

i don't know. something like that. <smiles>
"Great Poem!!!"
Tammy

Comment by missnomer

April 27th 2007 01:37
Hi Tammy...that's it!!!!! I still cant get it out of my head...better put a cd on....

Comment by charliesgirl_992000

April 27th 2007 01:44

Comment by KylieW

April 27th 2007 03:59
I was thinking of a different song...Bustamove.
Looking for love in all the wrong places....no fine girls just ugly faces.

Not sure why I shared that!

This is wonderful work. A real depth of meaning conveyed succinctly.

Beautiful

Comment by Kleonaptra

April 27th 2007 04:26
Oh, I can so relate to this!
I look back and shake my head all the time!

Comment by Miss Nomer

April 27th 2007 04:39
Dear Kleo...did I read that its your birthday on the 2nd May?...Mine too Happy Birthday for then..if I dont read you between know and then x Ps forget the earrings....its what's in the heart that matters

Comment by MelissaA

April 27th 2007 10:31
LOL Kylie - Bustamove!
I still have this part (no, not bustamove) stuck in my head too!

Comment by Miss Nomer

April 27th 2007 10:34
I'm old who the hell is bustamove??????? psl

Comment by Kleonaptra

April 30th 2007 00:35
If I can afford drinks we should have simultaneous drinks! We were born on the BEST day in the world you know? Sometimes its a little dark, but that just fills us with knowledge and POWER!

Comment by Miss Nomer

April 30th 2007 05:16
Hi Kleo...a birthday toast indeed...Now why is May 2nd so special apart from the fact we were both born that day...pray tell XX

Comment by Kleonaptra

May 1st 2007 00:10
Its a turning point. I was born two weeks premature so I could be born on that day. If I had waited I would have been a gemini. That day has a resonance. It always has dark edges, but its a day of power. Number 2 of number 5....The set of magic in the most magical number. Its a mingling of magics.

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